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MeggersNuff, 22 Oct 2008 07:33 am

Not Hungry... Right... A tad late in the upload then I had wanted but I forgot to upload it earlier. Rather odd considering Renske got this to me waaaay in advance lol. Ah well, it doesn't matter it was still uploaded on the same day :P

I noticed that in the Marcus' first dialouge section that he says Alec twice, and really, he shouldn't do as there is no need to. This is a slip up on my part, Renske just's writes down the words I give her.

that aside i think this came out all rather well. I know that Marcus has come across as a bit of a goit in the last couple of pages, but that's just because he knows the kind of things that go on in this world. Alec however has lived a pretty sheltered life considering.

The next page starts my favourite bit of this chapter. The Alec and Sun getting to know each other bit, hmm I should think of a better name for it than that.

So, Yay for upcoming character building!

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