When Sun, a mute catgirl drops down from the sky Alec's life changes forever. Hunted by the Enigma Corp. can they make it to the saftey of Eden, or die trying?

Chapter 2 - The Girl: Page 2

15 Oct 2008 06:29 am

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Author's Comments:

MeggersNuff, 15 Oct 2008 06:39 am

Lots Of Words lots and lots.

Sorry those of you who don't like reading. Just be thankful that this is the much edited down version of this convo between father and son.

I tried my best to reveal a little bit about the world and the life Alec and Marcus lead in it without doing a length narration page or forcing people to read flashbacks or background stuff.

Scaren is the nearest town to the home, you'll be seeing it later in all it's run down shanty town glory. That should be sweet :P

I thought about adding a joke after the "muntant girl chained up in your bedroom" line but dropped it in the end. It wasn't really important to the plot, and a little daft anyway. I'll leave the comedy for TST ;)

Also mentioned are the outerlands. These will be explained in a little more detail later on.

User's Comments:

TakeshiG, 16 Oct 2008 03:19 pm

Yay for colour!
The father reminds me of Detective Asuka.
I find always some character that reminds me of another. ^^
~Take-ji